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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:09 AM




lost in a daydream

first kiss
wedded bliss

rush of love
painted ponies
whirl around

diamonds dotting
chiffon wrapped skies

clouds making love

lipstick red roses
hug the white fences

houses of the holy

echos in my sacred spot

pick a flower
that pours my soul

do you know me?

the humming of chimes

melody of the wind

whispering wishes

he loves me!! he loves me!!

sugary words coating
pastel pink valentines

a dozen red beauties

drink from my cup

sweet intoxication

heart of my heart

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-13 08:45 AM


inkedgoddess
Lovely just lovely.

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2004-02-13 08:50 AM


each one...sweeter than the last...h
Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-02-13 10:01 AM


lipstick red roses
hug the white fences


What a perfectly lovely write this is!
A keeper for sure. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

vandana
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4 posted 2004-02-13 10:07 AM


enjoyed
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-13 12:28 PM


I almost started to jump up and down for you...great feelings here sweetheart, you deserve to be loved for a lifetime
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-02-13 12:37 PM


~smiling~  remembering when...

hugs
M

choshi
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7 posted 2004-02-13 01:52 PM


beautiful how you capture those images of a time when love was blind and we were so full of wonder....~P
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2004-02-13 02:33 PM



Y'know...
this has a lot of layers to it.
You did a good job
with your day-dreaming...

Enchantress
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9 posted 2004-02-13 03:10 PM


Very very nicely penned...
Loved the imagery...much enjoy your writing.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-02-13 04:33 PM


enjoy and have a happy
bklynboy
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11 posted 2004-02-13 04:34 PM


sweet
Richy
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12 posted 2004-02-14 12:23 PM





This was so good Inkedgoddess!
I hope you and yours have a
Happy Valentine's Day!

Richy


iliana
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13 posted 2004-02-14 12:40 PM


Made me think of all the cards I've saved throughout the years.  Really liked this.  
Margherita
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14 posted 2004-02-14 05:15 AM


Thank you dear Michelle, a "sweet intoxication" indeed!
Love and Happy Valentine's day.
Margherita

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15 posted 2004-02-14 10:36 AM


Michelle~
And the love flows so beautifully~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2004-02-14 08:45 PM


thanks for reading and commenting
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