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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-13 07:25 AM


Reflections

Reflections in a drop of dew
A world within a prisms view
A candle in the dark abyss
A handle on a chrysalis

The smallest sand that makes a beach
The spirit of the waters leach
The force that drags infinity
A micro of the macros be

It’s all within the mornings prime
The infant of the father time
The ranging of the changing awe
The very soul within the core

It is your shawl the lace of grace
It is the all your place in space
It is beginning and the end
It is the spend within the blend

All the rest is fantasy
Agony and ecstasy



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-02-13 07:28 AM


the great wonder and miracle of people, life and the majesty of the light...Sy, this was astounding....thank you for a perfectly positive and marvelous read.  Precisely what we need to see, what a great cup of coffee...(clicking my cup to yours) Salute!
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2 posted 2004-02-13 07:41 AM


a pro i must admit .... top shelf poetry
reflections can show us many hidden keys
thanks for the inspiration to keep writing
j wolf

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3 posted 2004-02-13 08:52 AM




Seemed the right thing
to add to this gem of yours,
Sy...

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4 posted 2004-02-13 09:25 AM


Morning Sy!
Another great write from you containing words of wisdom today.
Take a breather and stop for tea?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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5 posted 2004-02-13 09:56 AM


It is your shawl the lace of grace


Seymour, this one line will give me a serene smile all day! What a lovely poem this is. Going into my library. Blueberry muffins with your tea? hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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6 posted 2004-02-13 10:08 AM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2004-02-13 10:39 AM


All the rest is fantasy
Agony and ecstasy


Seymour, this is a wonderful write today...
All of yours are, though. Have a good day.
Hugs  
Ethel


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8 posted 2004-02-13 11:16 AM


ohhh I have MISSED your words of wisdom dear man, Love this.
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9 posted 2004-02-13 01:51 PM


Your reflections are always worth an extra gaze, my friend. *S* Excellent write! *S*
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10 posted 2004-02-13 02:32 PM


The smallest sand that makes a beach
The spirit of the waters leach
The force that drags infinity
A micro of the macros be

=============================

Ahhh Stinky I am smiling at your verses of verbiage and witty word play...
these lines reflect how cool you rule your rhymes.  



Well I cant say what I might believe ...
but if God made you ... he's in love with me.

5 for fighting

Richy
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11 posted 2004-02-14 12:25 PM



Seymour, your the best!
I hope you and yours have a
Happy Valentines Day!

Richy  


iliana
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12 posted 2004-02-14 12:29 PM


Happy Valentine's Day, Seymour!  What a bard you are...great writing!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-02-14 08:14 AM


Once again I've been called away but I thank you twelve times once for each of you lovely people. and an extra for JM.
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