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Laoha
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0 posted 2004-02-13 04:45 AM


My lunch

today
was a few drops
of tabasco

sprinkled
in a bowl
of pinto bean

soup
over a plate
of tossed green salads.

I found
my lunch today
very poetic.

2/12/2004

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aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-02-13 07:46 AM


ok besides the critique , did you really have that for lunch lol ,just kidding cool idea just needs more body (or some pizza)

wolfman

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2 posted 2004-02-13 08:50 AM


Laoha
That would be a hot poetic. LOL enjoyed

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-13 12:41 PM


cute
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