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Tear Out My Soul
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Tear Out My Soul |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Leave me bleed crimson blood pools on the ground where I lay crying my tears of red and agony |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
minimalism is a challenge in iself much imagery- few words well done "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Rhonda, but how did you sneak this one past me though? Keep up the great work.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Rhonda, this is heartbreaking, dearest friend, know we are always here if you need someone to talk over your feelings with, God Bless You, our hearts bleed for you to feel better, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rhonda, this is very good writing. Sorry I missed it the first time around. Hugs  Ethel |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The length is what makes it hit you so hard. There is a LOT of power and emotion in these few lines. Good work. *hugs*  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good writing -- I liked your use of phrasing and space. |
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