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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-12 11:59 PM






My Girl
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/2/01

My girl,
Oh, the way you shimmer
The way you spin and twirl
Oh, the way your hair waves and your eyes glimmer

My girl, my dream
Oh, the beauty of your words
Buzzes around me like a small cloud of honeybees
Oh, the sweetest words I have ever heard

    

My girl, my love
Oh, the sweetness of your smile
Your soft silky hair spreading the light from above
Watching you sway with the wind, out in my heavens meadow

My girl
My one true love is you
My girl
Your love sighs within my heart, sweet and true





"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-13-2004 12:02 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-02-13 03:52 AM


oh darn! now I"m going to have that song in my head all night!
garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-02-13 09:03 PM


Noah, this is another pretty
Valentine card. I hope you
have a Happy Valentines Day, my friend.
  

Hugs  

Ethel


iliana
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3 posted 2004-02-14 12:58 PM


Noah, this makes me think of the song, "My Girl," a song I always loved!  
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-02-14 05:01 AM


Dear Noah, how sweetly expressed!
May this girl dance in your arms today!
Happy Valentine's Day.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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5 posted 2004-02-14 08:24 AM


Noah - love dem candy heart poems...

BC

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