Open Poetry #31 |
Promise Me |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Promise me You will never leave me Promise me you will love me Till the end of time Promise me, That our love shall never part, Promise me, You will take my hand, And love me, Darling, I promise you I won't leave you lonely, I will love you Till the end, And now you must make a promise to me Promise me You will try to love me As long as we live. Because our love is strong, And I know, our love will stay alive As long as we won't get part, Promise me, You will love me Till the end of time, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
vandana....and may he never break his promises. lovely. Chris "At one glance |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I hope that both your promises remain true forever. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
may you receive all of the promises you ask for |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
how could someone refuse you a promise after reading this? very nice. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
vandana, wishing you the best... enjoyed your sweet write. Happy Valentine's Day. ~Sadelite~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... till the end of time! Yes, don't we all cherish this thought! Lovely. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
yes, this is the way it should be. enjoyed your poem. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if only time didnt have to end nice words |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and I believe you ARE promised with such true love to last forever and ever and may this blessing be given to you soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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