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vandana
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0 posted 2004-02-12 07:36 PM



Promise me
You will never leave me
Promise me
you will love me
Till the end of time
Promise me,
That our love shall never part,
Promise me,
You will take my hand,
And love me,
Darling,
I promise you
I won't leave you lonely,
I will love you
Till the end,
And now
you must make a promise to me
Promise me
You will try to love me
As long as we live.
Because our love is strong,
And I know,
our love will stay alive
As long as we won't get part,
Promise me,
You will love me
Till the end of time,

© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-12 07:44 PM


vandana....and may he never break his promises. lovely. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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2 posted 2004-02-13 12:41 PM


Vandana, I hope that both your promises
remain true forever.
Hugs
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-13 03:46 AM


may you receive all of the promises you ask for
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4 posted 2004-02-13 04:49 AM


how could someone refuse you a promise after reading this? very nice.
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5 posted 2004-02-14 10:06 AM


vandana,
   wishing you the best... enjoyed your sweet write.  Happy Valentine's Day.
           ~Sadelite~

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6 posted 2004-02-14 11:41 AM


... till the end of time! Yes, don't we all cherish this thought!
Lovely.
Love, Margherita

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-16 10:37 PM


yes, this is the way it should be.  enjoyed your poem.
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8 posted 2004-02-16 11:22 PM


if only time didnt have to end
nice words

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9 posted 2004-02-17 04:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and I believe you ARE promised with such true love to last forever and ever and may this blessing be given to you soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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