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choshi
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0 posted 2004-02-12 04:08 PM


Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.



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1 posted 2004-02-12 05:43 PM


seems youve been missing awhile!
hmm..cup of tea?
...yes thanks, that would be nice!

and so is your little gem of a poem! (as always)

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2 posted 2004-02-12 05:44 PM


Ohhh..love this Paul!
Yes...very warm touch with the tea.
Hugs~

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      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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3 posted 2004-02-12 06:11 PM


Paul, sounds delicious!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2004-02-12 06:16 PM


I love this and would be honored to have a cup of tea with you.

Hugs, Marti

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more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


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5 posted 2004-02-12 06:31 PM


Very nice! Grover.
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6 posted 2004-02-12 11:37 PM


Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.

o the water cycle
drip drip drip
frozen toes

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7 posted 2004-02-12 11:41 PM


The whistling teapot sounds a lot better than the cold whistling wind!   Your poem was very nicely written including vivid sights and sounds.   I enjoyed this.
          Sadie

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8 posted 2004-02-13 03:56 AM


nice
choshi
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9 posted 2004-02-13 08:34 AM


hmm..cup of tea?
...yes thanks, that would be nice!

and so is your little gem of a poem! (as always)

My pleasure, Dawn,......Milk or lemon. Sugar or honey?

Thank you ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!

~Basho

choshi
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10 posted 2004-02-13 08:37 AM


Yes...very warm touch with the tea.
Hugs~
  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      

Awww....Thank you, Hugs back.....I really like your signature.  ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!

~Basho

choshi
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11 posted 2004-02-13 08:38 AM


Paul, sounds delicious!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

Well, let me pour you a cup.....~P

choshi
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12 posted 2004-02-13 08:43 AM


I love this and would be honored to have a cup of tea with you.

Hugs, Marti

Well, Marti, let me pour you a cup....   ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!

~Basho

choshi
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13 posted 2004-02-13 08:44 AM


Very nice! Grover.

Thank you Grover,  ~P

choshi
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14 posted 2004-02-13 08:46 AM


Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.

o the water cycle
drip drip drip
frozen toes

Frozen toes,
warming by the fire;
sipping tea.

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!

~Basho

choshi
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15 posted 2004-02-13 08:47 AM


I enjoyed this.
          Sadie

.....Thank you Sadie, I am glad and also appreciate your detailed comments   ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!

~Basho

choshi
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16 posted 2004-02-13 08:49 AM


nice


Thank you Dixie, the depth of your own poems, leaves me very appreciative of your comment...~P

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