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Kazm
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0 posted 2004-02-12 03:03 PM


Bold as a Chick

friendship is an egg
keep it warm
protect its fragile shell
guard the nest until
the love emerges
curiously gentle
bold as a chick

                                                 Kaz

© Copyright 2004 Kaz Murakami - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-12 03:05 PM


You tell the whole story in an eggshell! Very good! Grover.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-02-12 09:15 PM


Kaz, this is very good...
and true.
Hugs  
Ethel

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-02-12 10:40 PM


Awwwww...I love this!
Therefore..I'm keeping it!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

steavenr
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4 posted 2004-02-12 11:49 PM


great metaphor for a great truth
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5 posted 2004-02-13 01:14 PM


the love emerges
curiously gentle
bold as a chick

Needing to be both! *S* What a beautifully delivered truth! *S*

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