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Within the Drops
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Within the Drops |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Within the drops thoughts of you pictures arrange then pour before me tears flowing streams of starcrossed love you come and go unpredictible as rain brown eyes smile thru a window's view the paint too wet to capture you [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-14-2004 07:58 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
isn't it just the way? sweet and sad write, I enjoyed |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very beautiful writing, with a perfect ending. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Michele.. Very much enjoyed the feel of this. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
very vivid - I liked it! |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I love this. I missed reading your work. I've been out a bit. But Im back and glad to read you |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
You paint the painfully lived truth of impermanence beuatifully, poignantly! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Not bad...enjoyed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Another wonderful write! Thank you inkedgoddess! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I loved it! Happy Valentine's Day! |
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