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Magicmystery
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Windsor, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-02-12 01:29 AM



Lost In Your Eyes midi

Undaunted Love

You always seemed to do this to me.
Your love can carry me,
Effortlessly through the day,
And the nights without you,
By my side are filled....
With the magic of dreams,
Where we hold each other tight,
And promise never to let go.

                  

Such souls are we that obstacles,
Like time and distance that affect,
Have just the opposite effect on us.
We long and miss and will not leave.
Our hearts are linked inseparably.
We spend our time together over wires,
And spend the time apart,
Inside each others’ mind and heart.

                    

A love like ours is special.
And meant to last a lifetime.
And I can see the time grow shorter,
When you’re finally here by me.
It is then we won’t forget,
The gift, the miracle God’s granted us,
Our two halves make a whole complete.
Time cannot harm nor distance defeat.

                    

When I finally see your face again,
And you see me as well,
Our eyes will meet, our lips will touch,
This is what I long for so much.
Our hearts embracing now from a distance.
Will find nothing in the way.
And the magic and the miracle of our love,
Will keep us close together till that day.

Sherry Gardner
               

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-12-2004 10:19 AM).]

© Copyright 2004 Sherry Lynn Gardner - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2004-02-12 01:45 AM


Sherry, this was a very romantic poem.  This makes a great Valentine's Day gift.
Death
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Twilight
2 posted 2004-02-12 03:06 AM


agree time distance mean nothing
"Emotions are the building blocks of yjr universe."

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-12 03:43 AM


oh my! such beauty here! I really enjoyed this! good to have you back around!
garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-02-12 12:21 PM


When I finally see your face again,
And you see me as well,
Our eyes will meet, our lips will touch,
This is what I long for so much.
Our hearts embracing now from a distance.
Will find nothing in the way.
And the magic and the miracle of our love,
Will keep us close together till that day.


Sherry, I love everything about this...the poem, music, graphics.
And I can so relate to this.
(thanks for teaching me about the music)
Hugs, my friend
Ethel


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-02-12 12:24 PM


Wow!  Sherry this is so beautiful!
Hope you and Wilfred have a perfect Valentine's Day!
~Smiles & hugs...missing you, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-02-19 02:34 PM


Sherry, I came back to read again this
beautiful poem. Thank you for saying that you thought of me and Gary when you posted it.
We love it!!
Hugs, my friend,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-02-20 01:40 AM


Lovely...James
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