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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2004-02-12 12:06 PM


Three thrillers strike, come take me aback,
drums in the blood like a heart would attack.
This, do you know, I, not to a fact?
Mine is a heart that's never hurried at.

First little thriller came eye was awake,
clasped to a stalk and stamped to a fate.
Second little thriller of prowling estate
seeps in the sleep, three cries t' forsake.

Third little thriller came much like a vine
grew like the foot that measures up the time.
Breed little thriller, pay us no mind, the
bean counter’s off so the poet’s out of line.

© Copyright 2004 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2004-02-12 12:18 PM


Well! It's very nice to read you Walt! How the heck are you? Still writing good poetry I see. Well, that doesn't surprise me at all, you always had a 'way' about you!


We miss you man!

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2004-02-12 12:22 PM


PDV thank you so much this is really too many miller lites but yuh know... it was good to see you too!
Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets
3 posted 2004-02-13 02:15 PM


Great to see a post from you, Walt. Have a few more and stay awhile longer, eh?
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-02-13 04:02 PM


wayoutwalt
Nice to see you back and a delight to read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-02-13 04:04 PM


Hey Walt!  Great to see you back!
Excellent write as well...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2004-02-14 12:22 PM


'the bean counter's off'? You mad poet, you. I like the flow of this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-02-15 03:09 PM


Hey Walty...we need more "wayout" poetry.

Have missed you. Glad I found this wonderful weave from you m'friend.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Grover
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8 posted 2004-02-15 03:14 PM


Enjoyed much! Grover.
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