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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-11 11:39 PM


    

MOON BEAM
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/02

Waltz in the moon beams with me
Under Eros's chandeliers
Slip on your crystal slippers sweetly
I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears

We'll make love in these showers of moon beams
Sipping through the jasmine night
We'll climb pyramids of passion lovingly
Embracing the soubrette cupid twilight

Upon agate shores of our dreams
We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes
As I rest with you on these sands of kersey
Lying in loves hammock with you in the moon beams, in lovingly wake

Come and dance with me in the moon beams
May your honeyed words drip from your lips in amore
Meet me in the moonlight, my darling
We'll sway in heavenly kiss betwixt moonbeams galore

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-02-11 11:41 PM


Sweet Noah, I don't know how you do it!  This is one of my favorites of yours.  
ice
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2 posted 2004-02-12 03:46 AM


Noah
A poem of movement and heat... good combination of Logos and Eros...excellent choice of pictures, enjoyed, especially the end stanza..The flow is a little eratic, perhaps you have made it this way because love makes us stutter sometimes, I would like to hear you read this in person, I bet it would smooth right out.
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3 posted 2004-02-12 04:37 AM


beautiful write with beautiful pictures...
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4 posted 2004-02-12 07:40 PM


nice
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5 posted 2004-02-13 12:06 PM


I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears


WOW!  I love that line, as well as your gentle flowing poem.  Happy writing to you.
                Sadie

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6 posted 2004-02-13 01:18 PM


Upon agate shores of our dreams
We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes

These lines are particularly lovely... I like this very much, M'toe! *S*

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7 posted 2004-02-13 02:28 PM


You are amazing!!!!
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8 posted 2004-02-13 03:45 PM


Oh Noah, this is absolutely incredible. you are such the romantic soul.

Huggles and Happy Valentine's Day dear friend...Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


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