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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-11 11:24 PM



When your mind sees the future
When people have the right to be right
When confusion is not a weapon
to vote you in on a dark night

When your integrity
Shines beyond achievement
Your faults you silently paid for
Your mistakes
You've tried to correct
Knowing you are not perfection
You dont try to lie

If you can take your ability
Convince others of it
You will be buried
In those who will try to destroy you
For their own ends

Think of this

No-one will ever want the people who live to destroy
To enjoy
Your happiness


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-12 06:42 AM



Layers of thought, here.  Well done!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-12 02:18 PM


Good job! Grover.
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