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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-02-11 10:21 PM



Don't remember poetry or meeting you
writing words of wisdom in a human zoo
allowed to throw taunts from my nightly cage
allowed to pull stunts on my worldly stage

Caught in the cycle that Shakespeare denoted
I am born on a theatre, platform coated
in motion towards a final curtain
I know life's cyclical brevity for certain...
as soon as I exit off the far left
another man will fill my human cleft

Don't remember your physical presence  
yet cameo images insist to decorate
a final resting place, result of subtle fate
don't remember ever meeting you
sharing a moment, even a seasonal flu


Am caught in a web spun by life's circumstance
to reap what I can sew given an opportune chance
to remember a poem or gently forget,
dry myself off when the weather turns wet...

As soon as I exit the stage, off far left,
another will stand in to fill my human cleft.




[This message has been edited by wordwizard (02-12-2004 10:50 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-12 06:53 AM



This leaves one asking questions, Martin...
as poems should do...

Thank you!

C?
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2 posted 2004-02-12 07:20 AM


A great interpretation of the cycle many of us feel more often than many. Enjoyed.
nn
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3 posted 2004-02-12 08:08 AM


What a piece!
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4 posted 2004-02-12 08:14 AM


wordwizard
An enjoyable read.

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5 posted 2004-02-12 08:57 AM


Wonderful piece of work this is Martin...
ahhh...the whole world is a stage....yes.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

wordwizard
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6 posted 2004-02-12 10:46 PM


Thought that a refrain at the end mught do this one justice, thanks all


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