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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-02-11 07:17 PM


With Her

Her eyes, her nose, her lips,
her hair, her skin, her happiness,
her serious side, her voice, her
aroma, her personality, her
essence, her disposition.
Being with her is my ambition.
Wish she'd give me permission.

February09
2004

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-11 07:27 PM


You cover it all. Good work! Grover
garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-02-11 07:37 PM


I hope she will, James.
Hugs  
Ethel

dingusjr
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3 posted 2004-02-11 08:04 PM


Yup...must be love.
iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-11 08:26 PM


JamesM -- very sweet -- try sending her this poem!
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5 posted 2004-02-11 10:35 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yes, share her this poem and let her grant you permission, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-02-11 10:45 PM


Sure sounds like love to me!



  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-10 05:19 AM


Thank you for the beautiful responses...she has given me permission to be with her...well occasionally...its a good start...James
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