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crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
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0 posted 2004-02-11 05:40 PM



I stumbled upon the word smitten today.It caught my attention. It sounds cute. Well I looked it up in the dictionary.

It said:

to SMITE means to deliver or deal a blow with or as if with the hand or something held.

Well Is that like being smitten by the little surprise of finding out that i am not loved anymore a couple of days before Valentine's day. Or is it like/when...

(feel free to continue this)


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2004-02-11 05:47 PM


Crazy4u --

Yes, I agree it must be
but then too, smitten for you
must mean that you were keen --
had a crush now crushed now blue.

If smitten mean struck
then it must be by lightning
frightening a timid heart
into hiding.

Or it could be that arrow
piercing, smiting that heart
with a string on its quill
someone pulls it apart.  

...........and I'm out.

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2004-02-12 04:06 AM


Carzy4u
There are apparently two meanings to the word (smitten) They seem to overlap in their connotation, yet it seems right to separate them.One is "to strike with a hard blow, to afflict" the other is "to affect or captivate" (Webster's College Dictionary)  seems you have experienced both meanings. Now I would like to see a poem about your feelings...please e-mail me if you write one, as this forum moves so fast I sometimes miss things....Good job on your reply, iliana.....
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2004-02-12 04:34 AM


yep, definite slap in the face, I'd say.

Keep your chin up and heart open!

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