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David2
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0 posted 2004-02-11 04:10 PM



Family

It matters not which path I chose to take,
Or whether it be calm or fraught with fear.
It matters not how grievous each mistake,
Or glorious the joys that bring me cheer.
Through triumphs or midst self inflicted pains,
My travels find me never on my own.
When friends are gone my family remains,
And for their love I never need atone.
I used their strength to see me through the nights,
When dawn was but a distant memory,
And so sustained rejoiced in morning’s light,
To face the day again from sorrows free.

I hope and pray that deep inside they know,
I love them more than I might ever show.

© Copyright 2004 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-02-11 04:16 PM


I hope and pray that deep inside they know,
I love them more than I might ever show.


I feel this way about my family
and loved ones too.
Hugs
Ethel



iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-02-11 05:16 PM


David - This is exactly how I feel about my family.  Enjoyed this great writing very much.  
steavenr
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3 posted 2004-02-11 06:44 PM


it is good to see a write like this...and they always will know...if we tell them
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