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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-11 06:18 AM



Still Wishing That I Knew

The strength you gave me
Will now help me through
Something as gone wrong
I'm still wishing that I knew

Everyone as their reasons
In doing whatever they do
What could be your motive
I'm still wishing that I knew

I'm finding it hard to forget
Maybe it was easy for you
Are goodbyes often silent
I'm still wishing that I knew

I know something is wrong
Yet I am left without a clue
I know silence as a reason
I'm still wishing that I knew


HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Jes
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1 posted 2004-02-11 08:26 AM


Smile

Only time will let the mind and heart forget the questions we never got an answer to.

Smile

Jes


HopeS
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2 posted 2004-02-11 08:33 AM


Thank you Jes ,  yes only time will tell , I do know something as gone wrong , but perhaps I will never know what

Hope

Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-11 10:19 AM




What an unfortunate way to
end something like this.

No answers, maybe a clue or two,
and probably of lots of second
guessing.

I wish you knew too Hope.

No one should have to go
through that...

Especially you...





Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-02-11 10:22 AM


HopeS
All answers are subjective so take it from there. Good write, enjoyed.

HopeS
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5 posted 2004-02-11 10:26 AM


Thank you Richy , yes I seem to be writing about this same issue a lot recently , but he as never been silent for this long before

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-02-11 10:28 AM


Thank you Seymour , I can only hope the answers will come soon

Hope

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-11 11:11 AM


Tides of silence -- so loud the roar!  I understanding (read my Pirate poem below to see).  Sad lovely writing.
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-11 12:53 PM


I"ll go find  him and smack him around if you need me to
HopeS
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9 posted 2004-02-11 07:56 PM


Hey thanks for the offer Dixie , yes you could get to Oregon much quicker than I could
Hope


HopeS
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10 posted 2004-02-11 07:58 PM


Thank you iliana , yes the silence can be both painful and frustrating , its the longest he as been silent in 7 years , kinda as me worried

Hope


Richy
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11 posted 2004-02-14 12:39 PM



Hope, I just wanted to wish you
a wonderful Valentines Day!
Take great care!
Richy  

HopeS
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12 posted 2004-02-14 05:57 AM


Thank you Richy , that was so sweet of you, I hope your day is special too
Hope


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2004-02-14 08:33 AM


HopeS - time will let you know, in time...

BC

HopeS
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14 posted 2004-02-14 09:15 AM


Thank you Bill for your caring thought in reply .... I did write a poem after this one with the outcome of my wishing , yes it was worth the wait ... the poems that slipped by was "
Far Away , Yet Close Enough  /pip/Forum88/HTML/001022.html

Hope

HopeS
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15 posted 2004-02-14 09:17 AM


Thank you Richy , yes my wishes were answered , I wrote the following poem /pip/Forum88/HTML/001022.html
Somehow this poem is still hanging around and the follow up slippped by

Hope


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