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Jes
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0 posted 2004-02-11 04:41 AM


Today is the day were the sun begins to shine.
Today is the day were the water becomes calm an easy.
Today is the day were the air is freezing but it still seems soft.
Today is the day were the wind blow but it does in silence.
Today is the day were the rain makes a rainbow but without water.
Today is the day were life is going smooth though its rolling fast.
Today is the day were the day is simple but it should be the same forever.
Today is the day were we realise, what the meaning with life is.

Today is the day were its " Just today "

Life is smiling always we just have to open for to see it.

Smile

Jes


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-02-11 04:45 AM


nice...nice thoughts for starting a new day

thank you Jes

Jes
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2 posted 2004-02-11 04:50 AM


Smile

Thank you back Passing, and besides the sun is shining i guess thats what made it.

Smile

Jes


Death
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3 posted 2004-02-11 05:29 AM


today MUST be the day
just to topen up one's eyes
see with appreciation
instead of envy

Yes today was quite a day

Compliments

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

Jes
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4 posted 2004-02-11 08:11 AM


Smile thanks for ya comment death and yes today is the day but also tommorrow is the day.

Smile

Jes


Toerag
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5 posted 2004-02-11 08:50 AM


I guess I try to think this way every morning...though usually doesn't work out...it's better to keep hoping and trying for those days....guess I get my "kicks" from trying to make others smile when I don't myself very often anymore....
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-02-11 09:28 AM


Jes
Today is the day, enjoyed.

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-11 11:20 AM


Jes -- great outlook!     .....jo
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8 posted 2004-02-11 12:26 PM


Jes, this is very true.
We need to all be this way.
Hugs  
Ethel

Jes
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9 posted 2004-02-11 01:38 PM


Toerag

Smile good to see good people think of a good day smile. I smile as much as i can also when im down in mood, and i guess its the best way to bring others a smile is if you can give them a smile first.

It feels like sad when you said you bring smiles cause you donthave many ya self. Once i learned to smile, my mom told me to go to the mirror and say hi its me im worth it, im worth a smile, hehehhe i tried i was nearly grinning of myself doing that, but you dont know how good it did, since my smile was there even when im sad.


Seymour Tabin

As them all they are the days we smile. Thanks for reading.


iliana

As long as the sun shines, the sun in universe or the sun inside our hearts, then we will have smiles.


garysgirl

Smile thanks Ethel but aint we all somehow inside like that, bringing out the sun, for the day we have to go through.

Smile

Jes


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