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LiquidMidnight
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0 posted 2004-02-11 04:17 AM


I've been debating whether this poem is an uncomplete thought or is actually finished. I guess physical length shouldn't dictate whether a poem is finished or not. Anyways....

Portrait of a Failed Experience

A question for my reverie
In weeping desires do compose
Why my thoughts are left ruminating
On the nightstand, alongside my book of prose

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1 posted 2004-02-11 04:18 AM


looks like a done deal to me
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2 posted 2004-02-11 11:42 AM


W O W !
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3 posted 2004-02-11 11:46 AM


Feels complete to me...I enjoyed reading it!
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4 posted 2004-02-11 11:52 AM


Sometimes the less said the better...and in this case, it's the best!
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5 posted 2004-02-11 12:29 PM


I enjoyed this..
it seems complete to me!
Hugs  
Ethel

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