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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-02-10 05:43 PM


When User Meets Loser

I thought that I would
lose her if I didn't give
her everything she wanted,
and so I kept giving and giving.
And then one day I didn't
have any more to give.
And you know what,
I did lose her.
When she realized I was
not going to give anymore,
I never heard from her again.
Has this ever happened to You?

JamesLee
Febrary08
2004

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-10 06:25 PM


Good poem... if you learn from this experience you're a winner! Grover.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-02-11 07:03 PM


Thank you Grover for responding...James
MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-02-21 05:53 PM


yea the more i give the more i am shot down and the more i do, the more it gets sabbataged,  sucks the life right out of me.  i give heart and soul  and the other things, people are not used, things are used, use things not people.


Margherita
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4 posted 2004-02-21 07:36 PM


Dear James, I think in a relationship that works both give and receive. True love is unconditional, it IS.
Thank you for giving us something to ponder ... to every effect there is a cause.
Love, Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
5 posted 2004-02-21 07:41 PM


Can't say that it has but I sure have see it happen to others!  Good one, James.  Sorry if that is what happened to you, but if it is, you're better off without her!
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2004-02-22 06:19 PM




(big angel hugs) It should happen to no one, though you are a winner for now understanding how it works, dearest friend, if at first you don't succeed keep the faith, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-02-22 06:47 PM


nope, you got lucky, I'd say
Magnus
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8 posted 2004-02-22 06:51 PM


Nope,  and I agree with Dixie...You got
lucky,  learning early the true intent.
Love is not always a bowl of cherries
dipped in Cognac....

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