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Open Poetry #31
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2004-02-10 05:37 PM

Heartbeat Haiku


Observe my heartbeat
For it beats strongly for you
Powered by our love


JamesLee
February07
2004
Hope this
is haiku
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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-10 06:27 PM

You're very close, if not dead on! Grover.
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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-02-10 07:06 PM

Lovely.
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-02-11 01:17 PM

James -- Wonderful!  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-02-11 07:00 PM

Thank you Grover, Nightshade and iliana for the nice responses...James
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