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I no longer exist for you

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nn
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0 posted 02-10-2004 03:16 PM       View Profile for nn   Email nn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nn

I no longer
believe
The words and the serious face

I no longer
accept
The fragilities of the reactions

I no longer
want
To care for the absence of a smile

I no longer
take
The pity or the so said help

For I need no help
And you are unable to see.

For I need no help.
No advices nor untruth.
No dissembled white on my grey.
And you are unable to see
That help was never what I searched in you.

Not in that objective way.

[This message has been edited by nn (02-10-2004 04:05 PM).]

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Grover
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1 posted 02-10-2004 03:29 PM       View Profile for Grover   Email Grover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Grover's Home Page   View IP for Grover

Good poem! Grover.
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 02-10-2004 03:39 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Hit right to the quick.
Well done.
TD
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3 posted 02-10-2004 03:46 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Very much emotion shown in this one.
Hugs to you
Ethel
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4 posted 12-31-2004 09:37 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I relate
 
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