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Strawberry Moon - (Second Servings)

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Marge Tindal
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Strawberry Of Moon

~*Marge Tindal*~
π
€€€€
η€€€•••€€€η
ηStrawberry moonη
across• a Milky Way• sky
Spooning • with • moonbeams
upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh
Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high
scrumptious • delight in • the night • sky
Melt-in-the-mind•flavor so very•appealing
Strawberry • moon • so • very • revealing
Once • in yearly phasing • she will • come
nothing • in •February sky• left • undone
Celestial• dessert in crystal • of dish
might • be time to make a • wish
Strawberry moon come again
•Creme dela Creme•


A little *Strawberry Shortcake* for RatLeader
Repost ... but guaranteed FRESH~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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well, I for one never saw the first one...so I am glad to see first helpings...nicely done
LeeJ
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I'd like a serving of that Strawberry moon if you wouldn't mind?  A terrific read and write Margie.  Thank you for sharing.
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Great [and tasty] concrete poem! Grover.
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Woo-hoo! Sweet! Nothing like those dainty pink nubbins to sweeten up your day ...or night....

~~(ΈΈΈΈΊΊ>   ~~(ΈΈΈΈΊΊ>  ~~(ΈΈ ΈΈΊΊ>    ~~~(ΈΈERΈΈΊΊ>
______________Ratleader______________

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Beautiful Marge!!  Love this...I do...I do.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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Marge/sis....Tasty and low cal...what more could you want.  
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And Marge, this was your Creme dela Creme!  I loved it!  ........ ........jo
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ok, ive never broken my diet with a poem before!!
this is delicious..
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Delightful! *S*
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Marge great picture poem. A Strawberry Moon sounds scrumptous. Your imagery was delightful and flavorful. ***Ivy Rose
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A little *bumpology*
with no apology ...
Just cause it's time
for some strawberries sublime~

Thankee to all for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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