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Soft Heart
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Soft Heart |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Free will paints the world Hurling over despite blemishes Like magnetic processes of nature You’re burning behind my eyes Dreaming societies of weather Like a gallant gladiator Filled with enigmas folding subsequent Like stubborn hallucinations Absurdly prevalent, what I adore Liquid ripples of sundry, does anyone see? Light a candle burning daylight To whom is infinity? Desperately hoping the same instant Like a loving mother and friendship Plummets into a rising chorus of safekeeping Not one sound invades the air Important to victorious living, like the charmed silence of a rainbow Oh Lord that I could cut out my tongue Tweaking stained glass windows in mid-stream permissions Look upon the atrium knowing the element, without diverting Yet I divert and couple the minutes, hoping desperately How only I can, and I wonder if it’s enough And I wonder what more I could do… Gaining new insights into the depth of inner dimensions Like the yellow hair of the moon Renewing passions with and for Him From the first installment to each noon Trying to life the sunshine to a higher plain Under the twilight oil feverish, I’ll write again and again Everything about my life is how I see the unseen Book marking a verse, then remembering Powdered destiny in a collective wonder of astonishment Atonement by our own wills sometimes heaves our muse Inevitably building momentum burning the seams Hopefully forever…we try Writing with a costly quill And yet, with each new day, we are introduced to the sun Over whelming sublimely scented lakes devise And I can smell water, feel its purr and hum Of thought patterns weaving humanity’s wonder Trying to follow the right concept of what is beneficial For what exercises happiness in others I am a mere thought through light, merely dust of quietness The dreadful truth is, the heart spreads spring into life We’ve got to keep it from hardening We’ve simply got to |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there were so many enchanting lines in this thought-provoking write, but I was particularly drawn to this one: "Tweaking stained glass windows in mid-stream permissions" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And yet, with each new day, we are introduced to the sun If only we can make it through the darkness. *S* I like this very much, Lee! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
We will suther, I promise! Smiles and hugs..and thanks for reading and writing |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I believe you complete the whole piece in this line - "And yet, with each new day, we are introduced to the sun" - Very well expressed piece and if everyone would believe in the line quoted above, wouldn't the world be a better place . . . jwesley |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This can only be rated as excellent work! Grover. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A soft heart absorbs its rewards...James |
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