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Rick
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0 posted 2004-02-10 05:41 AM



Waste not time that you all spend
For everyday is out on lend
And as what’s lent, we must return
And what we face is what we earn


© Copyright 2004 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2004-02-10 05:52 AM


Rick,
  Goodmorning, great words to live by,
good to see your poetry and words today!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Rick
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2 posted 2004-02-10 06:13 AM


Dear Romantic Heart, nice to see you here tonight, night here, day there, a big world out there. Thanks for the reply, have a great day.

Sincerely
Rick

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-10 06:36 AM


Dear Rick, thank you for this beautiful and wise reminder!
I print it out and keep it in sight.
Love, Margherita

Rick
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4 posted 2004-02-10 06:40 AM


Dear Margherita, it was a pleasure to share it with you, thank you for the reply, very much appreciated yet once again, be well my friend and have a great day.

Sincerely
Rick

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5 posted 2004-02-10 06:47 AM



Now Rick!  This is as short and as exact a poem as one could want, when it says it all!  Excellent!

Rick
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6 posted 2004-02-10 07:12 AM


Dear Sunshine, great to see you here, it is short isn't it, the first line came to me walking up my paddock from the dam, had to go in and write the rest, I am glad that you liked it and replied. I hope you have been well and enjoying life.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-02-10 11:37 AM


very very good advice  hugs and smiles
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-10 12:56 PM


Rick, I believe this is the shortest poem you have ever written, and it's a powerful one! As always, you lend me the insight that I need for today. Thank you. I hope you are doing great.

Dixie

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9 posted 2004-02-10 01:08 PM


Amen, Rick!! This
is so true!!
Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-02-10 01:40 PM


excellent trueism, well done...very tight
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11 posted 2004-02-10 11:03 PM


My first stop back here, and I find this llittle gem. As always Rick, you say it just right.
Sandra

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12 posted 2004-02-10 11:28 PM


Brilliant, Rick, really wise words well penned! .......jo
Rick
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13 posted 2004-02-11 05:30 AM


Dear Lee, thanks for the reply and comment much appreciated, be well my friend.

Dear Dixie, short and sweet, glad you got something out of it, thanks for the reply and words my friend take care.

Dear Ethel, thanks for the visit, great to see you, have a wonderful day.


steavenr, thank you for your comment today, much appreciated, take care.

Great to see you back Sandra, thanks for calling in and replying, welcome back, hope you are well.

Jo, thanks for you words, heart felt and much appreciated, great to see you here.

To you all my friends, again thank you, be well and see you all soon.

Sincerely
Rick



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