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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-10 02:33 AM

falling softly ...

falling
.....softly
me to
him
and within
his heart
all distance
gone
we sleep to dream
and ... dream
to touch
and live today
to love
and while time keeps track
we'll hold the key
and change our fate
as we see fit
those cotton candy fantasies
which melt like whispers
upon the breast
will bring him back
between my arms
against my flesh
now pebbled pink
flushed and scented by
his musk
i'll fall again
to dream ... for this
is where
he waits

©Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-02-10 03:08 AM

"for this is where he waits"

beautiful

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2004-02-10 03:27 AM

Oh Snowy...

You know, it just dawned on me,
that I haven’t been getting all that much
rest lately...

And you know what they say,
Early to bed, and early to rise...

Snowy, I’m going to have to
sleep on this one...

I’m sure that something,
will come to me,
as I fall softly, to sleep

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-02-10 05:25 AM

Beautiful...Senseous...Lovely
What can I say, this poem makes me warm.
Well done, Snow
______ice
><>

"We think by feeling. What is there to know?
I hear my being dance from ear to ear.
I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow."
(
exert-"The Waking" Thordore Roethke)

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2004-02-10 08:58 AM

Hi Snow. I LOVE THIS! Oh wow! This is absolutely beautiful, wonderful, pure genius! Did I mention I LOVE THIS! Well done my friend. You have just inspired my mind-to-a-thinkin'. (Oh no...that means I am going to draw from this and write some verse.) Of course it is going to have to wait for at least a few hours. I have an 80- mile round trip to make this morning before 9 AM. Still I am absolutely delighted I stopped in to read this before I began my trip. Well done Snow. Well done indeed! (BUMP!) Back to the top it goes.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-02-10 09:02 AM

Lovely....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-10 09:03 AM

Beautiful ... perfectly beautiful.
'to sleep, perchance to dream'
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

7 posted 2004-03-01 12:42 PM

OMG!!!!
I think that EvocativeVerse said it best

"pure genius!"

Yes, yes, yes!

M

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