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sanity and heaven
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sanity and heaven |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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sanity and heaven ...there's that moment when the breath catches snagging on the edge of sanity and heaven when your eyes swallow my gasp, while your hands brand me with another flaming song sing me into an arch torture me past the midnight of our desire give me one more reason to c a t c h again the breath from an aching throaty cry while the tangle of sheets 'round ankles leave pearl painted parted thighs quivering from ... the moment i leapt and left sanity behind ©Snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard, some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word" oscar wilde [This message has been edited by Snow (02-12-2004 04:45 AM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Snowy, how could this not, but take one’s breath away... Snowy, what can I say? This is Sensuerotopassionate! That’s a new word... just made it up... Had to... there was no other way to describe this Snowy...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very sensual! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
OMG! Snow I am going to have to reply to this one later. I think my heart just stopped beating. (Laughing out loud.) Seriously though this is exquisite. WOW! Very erotic. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my yes...softly sensual and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, erotic, is a good word. You're good at conveying the picture! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i very much echo what everyone else has said! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensual city...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
An elite poetess! Outstanding work! Grover. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Tastefully erotic, I must raise the ante of sensual just a notch higher...I do this when a poem of this subject matter quivers my inner emotions a little more than usual....enjoyed the quiver ________ice ><> |
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