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Lean In
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Lean In these lips have a sweet secret whisperers pour out without a mold lean in and taste confections for your soul |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Your poems, are a thing of beauty All of them I feel lucky to read them  |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
I always have enjoyed your work... "These lips have a secret..." short, yet very much enjoyed. -Rdz One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I had to read this several times before I actually read the words you wrote (I sometimes read what I expect, forgive me please). Now that I have read it (whisperers instead of whispers) I see clearer the meaning you intended...good write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, you are the sweetest |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And if this world tilts today, it's because so many are leaning in. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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