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Hiding, Again
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Hiding, Again |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Hiding, Again It plays feint elusive, for it was just there, moments ago, the “thought” of the century, a truth so profound that we thought to lace it in gold and tie it to our hearts… she and I. When it was brought up, there, in our little gathering, I said, Yes! That’s it! and my friend nodded, such that I’m afraid the nod bid thought a fond adieu… for it is hiding, again… I only wish profound would come when we call. For it needs to be shared. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh I know this. Sometimes I get ideas that zip so fast through my mind I barely understand what it was and then they are gone. This is such a frustrating thing to have happen. Love the way you penned it Sunshine. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it has to come out eventually...then you can grab it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 "wild women don't worry--wild women don't get da blues..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this happens to me so often Karilea. A senior moment I think 'they' say I'm having. Excellent write. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
don't you just hate moments like these? You expressed it wonderfully Karilea. Enjoyed  M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... How I understand! *S* I enjoyed this very much. *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, it feels just like this to me too |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Sunshine! Oh, I just hate it when my attempts at profundity evaporate and I turn the air blue with profanity. LOL Shenachie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good one, a keeper.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea.....umm...I...doh!  I had a thought about this, but it's gone! LOL. You know all too well how I feel about this subject! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, that's happened more than once lately -- and it would be nice if we could snap our figures and it would come back! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Somewhere in the land of Muse go those thoughts we do not use. Maybe I'll find one I choose lost by you, the poet's dues. Well said. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
You can run you can try to hide but good old Death will ALWAYS FIND YOU counting to 100 1 6 47 83, better hide fast "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
I am a child I loved your thought and recognition. Really -- Thanks for putting it that way -- an easy flow of the whole thing. God said "fear me" |
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