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Open Poetry #31

A Flood Of Teardrops

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2004-02-09 07:45 PM

A Flood Of Teardrops

Our love is but our fantasies fulfilled,
The essence of our hopes, our wants, our needs.
While echoes of persistent longings stilled
Are evidence of spirits newly freed.
So hungrily we taste taboo desire
And forge our private, hidden, lover's world,
Complete with wicked treats of lustful fire,
Delicious twists of ecstasy unfurled.
Let those so unaware be ever so
For love as ours demands its privacy
And let the aura born of passion's glow
Be all of what we share they ever see.

Cascading as a flood of teardrops wept,
Such love must ever be our secret kept.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-02-09 08:27 PM

Hidden passions? Hmmm? Well done. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-02-09 08:31 PM

Let those so unaware be ever so
For love as ours demands its privacy
And let the aura born of passion's glow
Be all of what we share they ever see.

Cascading as a flood of teardrops wept,
Such love must ever be our secret kept.

Another hidden passions one, huh?
Very good writing, David.

Hugs

Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-09 09:56 PM

Very nicely penned, David.

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