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Tim
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0 posted 2004-02-09 06:56 PM


Yesterday, a young man went off to war
left behind
a shed of tear
a tug of heart
and on a closet floor a catcher's glove
worn and tattered as the result
of a thousand sunny Kansas afternoons
where the worst thing that could happen
was breaking old man Smith's
back porch window.

Today, a soldier died
a mother cried
and the neighbor boy from down the street
hit a home run over the school yard fence
breaking old man Smith's
back porch window.

Tomorrow...

[This message has been edited by Tim (02-09-2004 09:31 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-02-09 07:00 PM



You leave one a lot to think about, Sir.
Thank you.

Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-09 07:05 PM


I wonder how true that really is... very true, I'm afraid. You've captured a unique and very good sentiment here! Grover.
dingusjr
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3 posted 2004-02-09 07:54 PM


Interesting write and a sad commentary.

celestecat
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4 posted 2004-02-09 08:13 PM


really good. made me think.
iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-09 10:04 PM


Speechless... don't know what to say except that it breaks my heart.  (Well written.)
steavenr
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6 posted 2004-02-09 11:00 PM


there is nothing quite as reflective as stepping back and looking at the endless cycles of life...well written
Martie
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7 posted 2004-02-09 11:02 PM


Tim...What was, will be, and what was glad, sad will be.  
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