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Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30
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0 posted 2004-02-09 06:47 PM



I’m not invisible, then why do you look right through me?
I am standing right in front of you but our eyes never meet.

I’m not muted, then why do you not hear my voice?
I am calling out to you but you never respond.

I'm not suited in armor, then why do you bruise me
with your thoughts?
I am waiting for your kind words, but yours are indifferent.

Please don't take me for granted.
My bank is near empty.
I need validation, too.

[This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-09-2004 09:20 PM).]

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-09 07:11 PM


Boy, I sure hope the intended reader gets the message! Grover.
Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30
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2 posted 2004-02-09 08:21 PM


Grover,
I don't think he will.

tavern wench
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since 2004-01-11
Posts 44

3 posted 2004-02-09 08:24 PM


He is not worth it.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2004-02-09 10:01 PM


Indifference does bruise when it is someone you love.  I understand.  
Youngatheart
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5 posted 2004-02-09 10:36 PM


iliana, you are always so kind to me. thank you for understanding.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-02-10 04:17 AM


ouch!


Youngatheart
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7 posted 2004-02-10 04:51 AM


Dixie,
Thanks for the hugs!

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
8 posted 2004-02-10 08:00 AM


It sounds like you are just about fed up withthis person.  Have you voiced these concerns face to face?
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