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Spiralling Rhymes |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I'm tempted at times to write s p i r a l l i n g rhymes. Not obsessive, depressive nor anal retentive. Lacking mundane never grand, never plain. Just a downward story in braille. But I fear the decipher, of the clueless young writer mind bearing no fruit in the read. Understanding, I plead! Bent wisdom, I bleed in puddles of red comprehensively read, by those that I find are not color blind. Experience teaching that words are far reaching, where youth's often bleaching pales and the meaning is lost. WhiteRose 2/09/04 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
in puddles of red comprehensively read, by those that I find are not color blind. I always know I'll find something wonderful when I click on your name! *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Ruth.. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always stay away far too long, m'friend you are missed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
colorful and creative |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ruth, this is lovely, sweet friend, no matter how your poetry moves, it always has a rippling effect upon Passions waters that cascades prisms in response, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WhiteRose -- Enjoyed and understood! |
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