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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2004-02-09 01:22 PM



I Can No More Dispute My Love

The potency of a kismet
hitherto unknown I perceive.
A breath stealing subtlety that
pleads for the touch of a lover.
Ambiguous motifs bind us.
Ascending necessity builds.
Like the petals of a flower
are the presses of your lips...soft,
redolent, and longed for. Let me
inhale anew the fragrance of
your locks. Let mine eyes be betrothed
to yours. This risqué wantonness
goes through hackneyed prerequisites.
I can no more dispute my love.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-02-09 01:36 PM


Kevin, that sounds urgent!! LOL
Good writing, Sir.  
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-02-09 04:31 PM


Nice writing...James
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2004-02-09 04:36 PM


Kevin your word usage and strength in the structure of your lines is just fantastic. I really could feel this one.. and I liked it a lot!! :-D well done!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

froggy
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4 posted 2004-02-10 01:24 AM


Such sweet words to read after 8 hours at work.

Kevin (Shakespeare),
  You have that magic touch that always brings
a smile to my face.
I love this one.

Ribbits and Ribbits


:-)

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-10 03:17 AM


oooooooohhh yes
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