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McLean
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state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-02-09 09:09 AM



Ducks all lined up in a row
This stay home mother has to go
The dog is walked to water grass
Kids are fed and off to class

Anxious in this venture new
I put on the perfect business suit
Under doormat goes the key
The teenager arrives at three

The house is still, the lights are low
The dog peers out the front window
Quickly adjust the driver's seat
I'm soon to contribute to the GNP

Walking in the door, finally feeling free
Balancing career and being mommy of three
Tidying my desk, and arranging all the things
I take a deep breath, and the cell phone rings

     "Hi, Mrs. Johnson?  This is your son's school.
     It seems your kindergartener may have the flu.
     He's feverish and has an upset bowel.
     You need to pick him up right now."

Ducks aren't all lined up in a row
And this working mother has to go
I call the boss and find relief
And go home to be with my family

After 11 years of staying home, today was to be my first day in the career world.  My entire family has been so anxious and happy...and my perfect first day has been a slap of reality, as I had to "miss" work due to an illness of my middle child.  It figures! Hope my potential employer still wants me tomorrow!


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1 posted 2004-02-09 11:05 AM


McLean, I hope that your prospective employer still
wants you tomorrow, too. Maybe so.
Hugs to you and your middle child,
Ethel

(hope your "baby" gets better real soon!!)

Endlessecho
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2 posted 2004-02-09 12:28 PM


This was a really good poem.  And I wish you the best!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-02-09 12:56 PM


tomorrow is another day

chin up

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