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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2004-02-08 11:31 PM


Snow Day
coated in candied confection
glitters as if gold
could it be a tiny inkling
of what heaven will behold?

January 15, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2004-02-08 11:36 PM


simply beautiful
Cerenity
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2 posted 2004-02-08 11:42 PM


Hi Vas,

Very nice to read your work, and it is so lovely as well,

Cerenity

bbent
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3 posted 2004-02-09 01:18 AM


beautifull poem but if i see snow shovels hangin on them pearly gates i'm gonna ask to go to hell...enjoyed the beauty and simplicity of this one.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Kristin Eve
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4 posted 2004-02-09 01:21 AM


nice thought. very simple and sweet.

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-02-09 01:58 AM


This is beautiful, Virginia.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-02-09 02:14 AM


it very well could
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-02-09 05:46 AM


One day we'll know for sure .... enjoyed Vas.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Margherita
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8 posted 2004-02-09 06:55 AM


Dear Virginia, this is so lovely. I am always in awe when I see all that glittering. It is a heavenly touch of light.
Love, Margherita


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