Yes, you're right Martie
Hi Vas, and Thank you so very much.
Thank you Steaven, I'm so happy to know you enjoyed. Thank you for stopping by.
Hey Sunshinygirl, glad you thought so too Thank you.
Hey Richy, nice to see you...the lighthouse the scenery is actually all in my mind;(you'll find it there heh) this poem is a mixture of fiction and fact. But there is a really nice one not to far from where I live.
I could send you pics if you like. Thanks for your lovely comments
Hi Christopher, yes I realised that the poem wasn't strong all the way through, after changing it several times I gave up (not good)trying. I appreciate your critique and funny you point out the repetition of "its"
becasue I made sure I didn't do that with the "that's" hehe. I bumbed out anyway lol.
"neither won straight sets" is staying right where it is. Again Christopher I thank you for your comments and advice
iliana, what a lovely compliment... thank you.
Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)