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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Barriers Beyond these barriers so ill advised, The tethers to a false morality, Unburdened by the weight of love disguised, We shed the yoke of forced conformity. Two wills apart, together one complete As harmony begets its own reward, No longer cloaked in shadows of deceit, We tend to honest needs too long ignored. While others seek perfection in their dreams Our fantasies find life in each embrace. They flood us with the joys of new extremes And soothe the stings of sorrows they replace. No intimate insipid moments shared By those who chose to love as we have dared |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
While others seek perfection in their dreams Our fantasies find life in each embrace. They flood us with the joys of new extremes And soothe the stings of sorrows they replace. David, this is a beautifully written poem. It sounds like unexpected love was found.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, don't know why this poem is not up there on the top, so I'll put it there! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I'll bounce this back to the top again too. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No doubt a keeper. TD |
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