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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-02-08 04:53 PM


We grew apart
and in the end
We'll blame the world
for our mistakes.

For every star
I will see your face
fading in the sky

For every river
forever you'll be
when you go away

Like the sun's
burning heart
in the sky

You will forget me
I will fade away
in your memories

And for every tear
that floods my tired heart.
I will remember you.


-Juju



© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-02-08 05:19 PM


I really like this one. It has lots
of feelings in it.
Hugs
Ethel

Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-08 05:52 PM


Very well written! Grover.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-02-08 07:04 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Juju, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, may loves true emotions touch your heart always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juju, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-02-08 07:13 PM


Very nicely written indeed.
Congrats on becoming a full Member.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-02-09 04:10 PM


Lovely...James
Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2004-02-10 12:00 PM


Thank you very much! (:
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-02-10 04:27 AM


bittersweet...excellent!
Juju
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In your dreams
8 posted 2004-02-10 07:41 PM


Thank you.

Personally I did a poor job at organizing it, but it still works (:

iliana
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9 posted 2004-03-03 05:43 PM


Juju, this was very well written -- I liked the verse about the sun's burning heart.  
Juju
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In your dreams
10 posted 2004-03-03 06:07 PM


Thank you! (Smiles)

-Juju

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