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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-02-08 10:20 AM

Desire
I gave it away
Telling a woman to take it
I had enough
For that day

I rose in a moment
To sup from an empty cup
And filled it up with dregs
that I drank willingly

The desire is downstairs
I have only to ask
i moved it downstairs
So it was not a drug

To prevent me
Leaving
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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-08 10:27 AM

I liked it. Nice images, well edited. Grover.
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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2 posted 2004-02-08 10:29 AM

Thanks

Dave
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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3 posted 2004-02-10 11:56 PM

Dave, enjoyed this.  Haven't seen you here in a while -- hope all is well.
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