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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-08 10:07 AM



Senuousness
Electric wireless vibrating
By sounds, eyes, body movement, relief, fear

Sleeping awake in relaxation

No
No dreams
Pleasure
Memories

Awake in a low level of vibration
From the depths vision in flicks of electric
Moans a tempest
Lights of a tempest lamp
Overflowing with spirit
Lighted carefully

And watched
For nurture


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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-08 11:18 AM


Sensualness, indeed! Grover.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-02-08 11:37 AM


DavePage
Good metaphors, enjoyed.

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-08 11:59 AM


You have a way of capturing the atmosphere of special moments. It's as if you picked out the juiciest ones from a wide palette of thoughts twirling in your head.
Very good.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-02-13 07:24 PM


Thank you for your comments

I value them

It is a magic of lust or love for a moment writes it's own poem of desire

And thanks

love Dave

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