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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-08 07:23 AM


Tie a Ribbon

Who’ll tie a ribbon on shadows pall?
Dance the beacon of moonlights crawl
Stand and gather the senses grace
And wear the mantle of its lace.

Catch horizons on the fly
Cut the Gordian knot of tie
Stare into the omni view
Call upon the inner you.

Could you walk a rainbows path?
Wave the acid of your bath
Set you free a snow white dove
Give a rose unto your love?

It’s all within a point of view
Within this earth there’s nothing new
Your Swiftly passing mound of grime
Dissolving in the round of time.

Be you happy in or out
Be you both, than you are stout.

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-08 07:27 AM


Wow, dear Seymour, I was just looking for you when you "popped" in.
And with what a wondrous poem!
This is a keeper!
I love every word of it.
Just great.
Love and Joy. Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-02-08 07:38 AM



Seems you UNtied the ribbon on a whole new year before you, Sy!  What a great way to look into what is yet before you!

scorpio
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3 posted 2004-02-08 09:16 AM


Sy you show us the rainbow path each day.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-02-08 09:26 AM


Seymour~
You are one amazing gentleman poet~
So blessed I feel to read these little gems from your pen~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-02-08 09:33 AM


Sy you are so amazing....
And I hope you had a wonderful birthday!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Martie
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6 posted 2004-02-08 12:26 PM


Sy

Thank you for the uplift of this, dear...I needed it!  I hope your birthday was a delight, like you are.  

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-02-08 12:58 PM


made me smile today
Magnus
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8 posted 2004-02-08 01:12 PM


Thank You Sy,  yet another well crafted
thinker you have given us to ponder.

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9 posted 2004-02-08 03:19 PM


Seymour, this is amazing!! I was going to
copy my favorite lines, but I would
have done the whole thing.
Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-02-08 05:03 PM


Margherita
Thank you sweety.

Sunshine
Love you too.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Marge,
You are a love.

Nancy,
Love you too

Martie
From one delight to another?

passing,
A smile is a smile.

Magnus
My friend Barry.

Ethel,
Hugs back,

jaicie114
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11 posted 2004-02-08 10:44 PM


Wow, Sy...lots to think about with this one! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

suthern
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12 posted 2004-02-09 10:20 AM


It’s all within a point of view
Within this earth there’s nothing new

But it can still be seen with fresh eyes... and even seeing someone see it so brings renewal. *S*

Beautiful work, my friend... I hope your birthday was a wonderful one!

Rdz9
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13 posted 2004-02-09 02:09 PM


Brightened a dull day at school quite nicely. Enjoyed.
-Rdz

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-02-09 02:13 PM


jaicie114
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.

suthern
Thank you sweet, I did have a nice birthday.

Rdz9
So glad it bright your day.

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