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Open Poetry #31

She...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-02-08 12:29 PM

Sorrow enters in tonight,
...no knock upon my door,
She stands beside me at my bed,
...the same as nights before.
She stands alone with face disguised,
...in shroud of night’s befall,
Not reaching out yet of her touch,
...I feel with numbing pall.
Rent by storms of earthly pain,
...with wounds as yet unhealed,
I scream aloud show me thy face,
...to sorrow unrevealed.
No answer comes from forth her being,
...she moves not from my side,
Standing there in silent watch,
...my pleas by her denied
She binds me tight I cannot move,
...I feel of sorrow’s bite,
As there she stands beyond my reach,
...O’ God, I fear the night.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-02-08 12:33 PM

Tim....I know this.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2004-02-08 12:34 PM

I have always liked reading your poetry...

I am diving in...deep!

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-02-08 06:44 AM

The elusive, dark unknown...
you've captured it very well, Sir.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-02-08 06:49 AM

This is a great write and I can relate to it. The deep melancholy, the unmet yearnings ...
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-02-08 07:02 AM

replace with he...and your poem could be mine....

nicely done

M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-10 11:49 PM

Excellent poem, Tim. Whoa, painful to imagine, heartfelt.

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