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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-02-07 08:48 PM

Oh love, dear love, of water’s splashing kiss.
Of grasping hands in light’s caress of dawn.
Of breath filled rains in turbid flowing bliss,
awake at morn before the newborn fawn.

A step onto the carpet filled with spring
to find the clover leaf for fame and luck.
A penny thrown into the fountain’s ring
as wishes form upon each petal’s pluck

If not the coin found is lying heads
and leaves upon the clover are but three
Will love be found or stripped, one’s heart to shreds
as stars arch down from out the heavens free.

For dreams shall give away the wayward heart
and pennies in the fount are but a start.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

1 posted 2004-02-07 08:51 PM

nice read

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-02-07 08:57 PM

Barry...just so lovely!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-07 09:49 PM

"For dreams shall give away the wayward heart
and pennies in the fount are but a start."

Wonderful Barry....big sighs!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-02-07 10:11 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Barry, some pennies fall tails and some clovers just don't have pastures in quartets, but love graces even the most irregular things and serendipity comes to play in these special instances! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2004-02-08 01:08 AM

Magnus...You certainly do wax poetic. This is an amaxzing love poem that has an old world feel to it. Wonderful writing. ***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-08 01:19 AM

love the whole thing, but the ending lines are awesome!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-02-11 12:08 PM

Wonderful poetry for this, the month for lovers!

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