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Mt Rowley
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0 posted 2004-02-07 06:42 PM


half

What on earth should i say to you
half of would you really care
i waited deep down knowning
In sickness yours wasnt there

trying to continue, hoping i was wrong
Your not lying is it so true?
Your not lying it is so true

Why on earth did i fall for this
why didnt i believe the truth inside
all because i wanted it to be so true

Half tells me i dont know
but half want to know why
deep down i know the truth

I am half



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Gaia
1 posted 2004-02-07 07:58 PM


a sad tone to this
it's hard to feel as if you are only
halfway
there

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2 posted 2004-02-07 09:52 PM




(big angel hugs) Half of you may feel lost but keep the faith and soon upon suprise you will see yourself as whole with the blessings coming your way, yay, God Bless You, I send heart hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-02-07 09:54 PM


Sad write..but still, very much enjoyed.
Hugs

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-08 12:21 PM


My belief is that it takes at least half effort on the other's part; some times it takes 100%/100% partnership!  Thought provoking.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-08 05:10 AM


so sad heart hugs to you
Mt Rowley
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6 posted 2004-02-28 07:03 PM


thanks kindly for your responses, they mean a lot to me...
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