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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-02-07 04:20 PM


i'm sorry for crying all the time
my tears make a waterfall
hope kills
remember that
always and forever
i've learned my lesson
never trust love
life
hope kills
remember that
always and forever
i've learned my lesson
pick me up
so you can knock me down again
like you always do
always do...
hope kills...

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2004-02-07 04:29 PM


-Nodding- I know this...You wrote it well.
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-07 05:33 PM


A great job of expressing such difficult feelings! Grover.
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2004-02-07 09:43 PM




(big angel hugs) Hope just needs to be moderated is all, sweet friend, taking too much can cause side effects but having the general faith of it is the most rejuvenating thing, yay, God Bless You, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-02-08 12:14 PM


Ouch!  I hear ya.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-08 04:39 AM


sometimes I feel that way too
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