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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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0 posted 2004-02-07 12:41 PM



You broke my heart when you walked away.
Never turning back to see what you done
to me.

How could I live without you in my life.
Turn around,look at me.
I beg for you to stop;
But you do not hear nor even see
as my tears fall like...

drops of rain upon my windowpane.

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1 posted 2004-02-07 12:44 PM




(big angel hugs) I'm so sorry to hear of your tears, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way to wish the tears to become the crystalline rain outside and you can go singing in the rain in joy, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-07 12:47 PM


Very sorry about your heartache... but you really express yourself well!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-02-07 01:52 PM


I understand this one well...trust me, it gets better
ice
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since 2003-05-17
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4 posted 2004-02-07 08:43 PM


Nice to see you posting again
enjoyed your poem
_______ice
  ><>

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
5 posted 2004-02-12 01:01 AM


Sorry it took awhile to say thank-you
all for the nice comments.
Too many things has gotten in my way lately at getting to this part of my life.

:-)

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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6 posted 2004-02-14 12:53 PM


Keep 'em coming, froggy -- it's good therapy.  Enjoyed your writing.  
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
7 posted 2004-02-14 01:35 AM


Thank-you iliana.
Yes writing is good therapy but my job is what keeps me busy alot with no time to really write.

:-)

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