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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-02-07 12:18 PM




When I am ready to slip
into yonder clouds and skies of blue

I will think of how you took my hand
and helped me cross raging rivers,
climb mountains that seemed too high
for me to see beyond
my own short sightedness.

Thanking you,
well in advance,
for offering me
your hand.

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-07 12:23 PM


You capture intimate feelings with simple diction. Very nice! Grover.
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2 posted 2004-02-07 12:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always take loves hand and walk the world accompanied by its blessings, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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3 posted 2004-02-07 12:30 PM


Hi Kacy  
It's good to see you. I hope that your
move was successful. My daughter moced last weekend.
She's still way up in Massachusetts, though....
thousands of miles from me.
Hugs to you,
Ethel

froggy
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4 posted 2004-02-07 12:49 PM


Simple but says a lot.
I like it.

:-)

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2004-02-07 01:18 PM


thanks, friends
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6 posted 2004-02-07 05:49 PM


Happy writes well from you Kacy...  
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7 posted 2004-02-07 05:58 PM


enjoyed
jwesley
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8 posted 2004-02-07 06:24 PM


...funny the difference a hand can make, huh.
Loved your thoughts, you...

jwesley

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9 posted 2004-02-07 06:50 PM


such sweet thanks from one so worthy of recieving back far more just a portion of what you've given...lot's one can do with a hand...why is it my better sense says i ought to stop there???lol...thank you for that midnight mojo thats gotten me through many a challenge.
... ...

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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10 posted 2004-02-07 06:53 PM


Ah...This is so sweet and appreciative!  I liked it a lot-it's so simple and yet shines
your good writing.  Much enjoyed...
                Sadelite

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11 posted 2004-02-07 07:55 PM


thanks to each of you for reading
and RAY? LOL, yes, for back rubs too, heh?

iliana
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12 posted 2004-02-07 09:45 PM


So sweet!  
Richy
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13 posted 2004-02-07 09:55 PM



This is very sweet Kacy.

Just don’t go slipping into anything blue,
cloudy and yonder, except these here pages okay?

Well... I suppose you could slip into
some blue clothing if you had too...

Or maybe, a blue lake would probably be safe...
as long as you wear a life jacket all right?

Oh... and I guess, that could be blue too...




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14 posted 2004-02-07 10:04 PM


How lovely Kacy...
A wonderful thank you!
Hugs~Have a safe and speedy move.

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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