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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-02-07 12:06 PM

Go In Simplicity

The edge of dawn smiles sweetly
through the blue horizon
dandelions begin to worship the sky
they drink dew from the fertile ground--

Your moist soft lips cover mine
like a lost sunrise finally found.

©2004 Grover Gall

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2004-02-07 12:35 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your poems shine in such gorgeous simplicity that feels so colorful and heavenly, sweet friend, and may your heart always be a flower field blanketed by the soft zephyr of love, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-02-07 12:43 PM

A very sweet poem Grover.
Makes a lady froggy smile.
Great job.

:-)

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

3 posted 2004-02-07 01:42 PM

Grover,
This was precise and moving. If I were more informed, I might consideer constructive criticism, but being as I am not, I will simply remark that I enjoyed reading your work.
David

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-07 02:07 PM

oh my...that is gorgeous! very sensual indeed!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-02-07 02:49 PM

Go In Simplicity

The edge of dawn smiles sweetly
through the blue horizon
dandelions begin to worship the sky
they drink dew from the fertile ground--

Your moist soft lips cover mine
like a lost sunrise finally found.

This is just beautiful, Grover.
As you can see, I couldn't pick a favorite
part...it all is.

Hugs

Ethel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2004-02-07 03:25 PM

oh grover... you romantic, this is beautiful.

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2004-02-07 03:28 PM

nice...nice...very nice...h

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-02-07 03:46 PM

Wow, Grover!

I'm sensing that you are a hopeless romantic, much like myself. This was so beautiful.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-02-07 07:29 PM

Oh, YES! A perfect sunrise morning and a masterfully crafted poem! Much enjoyed, Grover!
Sadelite

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-02-07 07:32 PM

Softly sensual...so very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

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